Splendid @agmoore Simply splendid!
Just what an interesting, enlightening,and heartfelt story you have written. It was quite the delight my dear! It was certainly the wildest display of true troubled in paradise relationship I have come across in while...
Also, I must say, those first opening lines
I love her, not you.
We're pretty damn good hook as well! Well done!
You are very kind, @zeraton. I apologize for this late response. Every comment is important to me and I love your comment. You were affected by the story. What more can an author ask for? This has such simple structure. I'm glad you felt that simple though it is, the story has 'punch'.
That hook. I'm glad it worked. Might not be very sophisticated, but it is kind of a play on the cliche ("I love you not her").
I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and comment. Wishing for you a week that is creative and pleasant.
Nah... no need to apologize my dear.
And really, it was my pleasure to read your story.
I equally wish you the same week full of utmost creativity and pleasantry!