Wow, what a story.
The way you have crafted these conversations truly gives life and emotions to these characters. Certainly, by their esteemed notions and opinions, you have given us a little glimpse to how these characters each perceive their world and society around them.
Lol, is it weird that I read each character's line with different voices :)
Needless to say, this was a well thought out story with a well in depth and fascinating dialogue to it. Well done Dera!
Oh and just one More thing though:
Or rather, they had amulets that ward off people with evil intentions.
Pelumi strikes me as an eccentric :)
Hahahaha. I don't think it's weird at all. I did write them with different voices. Loooool. You have noooooo idea.
Yes. In my head, Pelumi was the most striking of the three. I gave him big eyes for a reason. He's also very... He's more of a practical man. And he has subjected beliefs which could be either good or bad.
I appreciate your kind words and support. Thank you very much. ❤️
Don't mention it, it was my pleasure reading your story.