Wow. That's a heavy story. And so true to life. I found my self tearing up reading it. It sounds like a personal experience that you went through in your past. It hit me pretty raw because i myself am currently going through something very similar and heartbreaking. When i read this post the feelings were very viceral.
If this is pure fiction then you really have a knack for this type of writing. You should do more of it.
Judging by the fidelity to real life feelings and emotions i can say that i believe you're somebody who has gone through a lot in life. Seen it. Been there done that. That experience i bet would lead to some great fiction stories.
I enjoyed this read very much. Thanks for leading me to it.
Thanks mate and sorry to hear you're going through similar.
Yes, pure fiction, I have not experienced this, although also yes, I have lived a lot, seen a lot, and that helps me get the emotions down on the page I think.
I did this just to see if I can and I enjoyed the process. I almost didn't post it as I thought maybe people would think it's dumb but it was well-received. I'll do some more, got to be in the mood.
Thanks for reading and commenting.