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RE: Hyperanimated waste

in OCD4 years ago

I want to somehow see this differently but then my head is filled with the image of fired burning up in a huge frenzy.
First of all I love the fourth paragraph it was pulsating seeing the paradox and the contrast and how the wordings magnified the effect to create more mind twisting imageries.
It's beautiful without doubt.
I see you have been writing in this sort of style other than the stanzaic style, how is this? I mean why did you go for the former?