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RE: Understanding litecoin an improved version of Bitcoin

in Project HOPE4 years ago

First, work on the formatting of your blog.

No doubt, Bitcoin was considered as the first
digital cryptocurrency before other alternative coins begin to unveil in other subsequent years. unlike Bitcoin which was created by anonymous group of individuals, the creator of litecoin is known as

Pay attention to grammar like starting the sentence on a capital letter and spacing. I wouldn't bat an eye if it's a personal post talking about your daily life but you're trying to present an informative post, so better to make it look authoritative at least with right grammar.

In terms of making choices for traders, they choose litecoin since it also provides less fee for processing transactions there is no doubt litecoin blockchain is an improved version of bitcoin.

The whole segment leading to this point can be summed into Litecoin is faster than Bitcoin and this is why people love it for yadayadaya. You can tell the message straight without adding several fillers. Those sentence fillers don't add value to the post. It just stretches it and drags away your reader's attention to somewhere else.

Most of the subsequent segments are like that. Telling several sentences while having a redundant thought behind them. Your article can be shortened to a few paragraphs and the content isn't eliciting any drive to get hooked.

Disadvantages

You only placed 1 while introducing the segment in plural form. I was expecting several disadvantages.

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Hey thanks i do appreciate your feedback, would put more effort towards writing more interesting posts.
I'm glad you read through the post.
Will tag you on my next post soon.

Will tag you on my next post soon.

Don't bother. I don't get paid to review for my time. Your best bet to improve is just reading more of what works rather than sticking to your own concept of "interesting".