Dolor
En aquella época de comunicación mental
las personas eran anticuadas y grotescas.
Mas en años venideros,
cuando los diálogos sean pensamientos,
los seres se presumirán avanzados,
desconociendo su inherente pasado.
Pero en este presente, invadida por su soledad interior
y quién sabe desde hace cuánto tiempo
(no es oportuno discutir sobre el tiempo ahora),
ella emitía sus desesperados mensajes.
Sin embargo,
todos fueron desoídos.
Una máscara, improvisada en momentos de dolor,
brotando su barro urgente
entre los rasgos imperfectos y torpes,
rodeaba mi rostro
y me atrevo a decir que se extendía más allá,
incluso de mi cuerpo.
Acaso era la misma que un hombre primitivo
diseñó festivamente.
Tal vez la que cierto rey orgulloso
utilizó opresivamente.
O con la cual algún guerrero feroz
se defendió heroicamente.
Pero en este instante,
habiendo desechado las emociones
como un antifaz roído,
hablemos del tiempo…
Pain
At that time of mental communication
people were old-fashioned and grotesque.
But in years to come,
when dialogues will be thoughts,
beings will presume themselves to be advanced,
unaware of their inherent past.
But in this present time, invaded by their inner loneliness
and who knows how long ago
(it is not appropriate to discuss time now),
she issued her desperate messages.
However, they all went unheeded,
they all went unheeded.
A mask, improvised in moments of pain,
sprouting its urgent mud
between the imperfect and awkward features,
surrounded my face
and I dare say it extended beyond,
even my body.
Perhaps it was the same one that a primitive man
designed festively.
Perhaps the one that a certain proud king
used oppressively.
Or with which some fierce warrior
heroically defended himself.
But in this instant,
having discarded emotions
like a gnawed mask,
let's talk about time...
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Bases del concurso / Contest rules: Literatos - Concurso de poesía: La máscara y sus sentidos
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Licencia / License: Dominio público / Public domain
Traducción / Translation: DeepL.com
Una máscara improvisada en tiempos de dolor, muchos están obligados a llevar esa máscara a diario. Bonito poema amigo, saludos!
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Me gustó tu poema suerte en el concurso.
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