The Last Days at Forcados || Rewriting the End

It's being a long time I wrote about a book I've read, so having the opportunity to so is really a great one for me.

I'll be rewriting the end of the story titled

"Last Days at Forcados High School".

This book was written by A.H.Mohammed in the year 2013.
I read this book seven years ago. It was a school book met for those taking JAMB (Joint Admission And Matriculation Board), here in Nigeria.

About the book

The book was all About Jimi Solade, the protagonist. He's a student of a prestigious school called Forcados high school. He was a brilliant student and also participated in various activities of the school.

He lives with his parents, Mr and Mrs Solade. He has two siblings, Femi the eldest son and Wole his immediate elder brother whom he loves so much.

Wole was the bad egg of the family, he engaged in different criminal activities which made his father to hate him.

Despite wole's attitude, Jimi loved him more than his eldest brother, because he was always there for him. Their mother Mrs Solade loved them all and always tried her best to keep her family together.

At school Jimi was every girls crush but he only liked a girl called Caro. Jimi had two friends that were really close to him, Ansa and Nene.

A new girl was admitted to their school few weeks after resumption. Her name is Efua Cooker, she was beautiful, brilliant and also saucy.
She came to forcados because she was expelled from her school.

When Jimi saw her he got attracted to her and started to forget about his crush Caro but she wasn't attracted to him, infact she hated him because she felt he was too pompous.

Jimi's mother felt sick of ovarian cancer, so after some much treatment, she died. This situation was really hard for Jimi, he felt so lost and without anyone because his father travelled out of the country leaving him an his brother Wole, who is not always around.

But due to the death of his mother, he became close to Efua, they became friends.

Efua was a girl who stayed with her mother and her step father who abused her. In one occasion when she tried to defend herself from her stepfather with a knife, she hurt him very badly and her mother refused to believe her own side of the story and called her a demon-possessed liar and that she wants to ruin her marriage. This made her mother took her to stay with her Aunt and that's how she went to forcados high school where she met Nene who became her close friend.

At school, they also had a new corper, who Efua was fond of because of her activities. She became close with the corper, so at one point she wrote a letter to give to her but unfortunately for her, the letter got into a wrong hand and the person published it to the whole school.

Efua and the corper were accused of having something together, it wasn't really easy for Efua because all her friends neither believe nor stood by her including Nene and Jimi.

This situation Made Efua and her friends to be on bad terms, but Nene realized her mistakes and went to plead and Efua forgave her.
Jimi was sorry but Efua was not ready to speak with him.

The End to Rewrite

Jimi's brother, Wole framed him by lying to the police that his brother, Jimi was the Mastermind to the thievery him and his gang committed at jimi's school Chemistry laboratory. Jimi was called to the station and his brother pleaded with him to accept the charges to save his life and to my greatest surprise, Jimi accepted it because he loved his brother and he was the only family he has.

The principal of the school gave him some punishment and also told him to apologize to the whole school.

On the day he was to make the public apology, Efua came to school. When Jimi finished his apology, Efua indicated to say something.

When she was given the opportunity to do so, Jimi was scared because he thought she wanted to add salt to his injury but to his greatest surprise, she stood for him by accusing the principal, by asking him a question which read this, "How well do you know your students and how much do you really care for them?". After her speech the principal felt guilty and did everything possible to amend his ways.

After getting to know why Jimi accepted the accusations, he dropped all the charges, because he felt sorry for his actions.

ℝ𝕖𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝔼𝕟𝕕

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ℑ 𝔴𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡 𝔥𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔩𝔬𝔳𝔢𝔡 𝔦𝔱 𝔦𝔣 𝔚𝔬𝔩𝔢 𝔥𝔞𝔡 𝔯𝔢𝔠𝔢𝔦𝔳𝔢𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔭𝔲𝔫𝔦𝔰𝔥𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱 𝔣𝔬𝔯 𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔠𝔯𝔦𝔪𝔢𝔰. ℑ 𝔨𝔫𝔬𝔴 𝔍𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔩𝔬𝔳𝔢𝔡 𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔟𝔯𝔬𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯 𝔟𝔲𝔱 𝔍𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔴𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡 𝔥𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔞𝔩𝔩𝔬𝔴𝔢𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔪 𝔠𝔥𝔞𝔯𝔤𝔢 𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔟𝔯𝔬𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯 𝔣𝔬𝔯 𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔠𝔯𝔦𝔪𝔢𝔰, 𝔦𝔫𝔰𝔱𝔢𝔞𝔡 𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔱𝔬𝔬𝔡 𝔣𝔬𝔯 𝔥𝔦𝔪 𝔞𝔤𝔞𝔦𝔫. 𝔄𝔫𝔡 𝔫𝔬𝔴 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢'𝔰 𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯𝔶 𝔭𝔬𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔟𝔦𝔩𝔦𝔱𝔶 𝔚𝔬𝔩𝔢 𝔴𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡 𝔣𝔯𝔞𝔪𝔢 𝔥𝔦𝔪 𝔞𝔤𝔞𝔦𝔫 𝔟𝔲𝔱 ℑ 𝔥𝔬𝔭𝔢 𝔥𝔢 𝔡𝔬𝔢𝔰𝔫'𝔱.

𝕬𝖑𝖘𝖔, 𝕴 𝖜𝖔𝖚𝖑𝖉 𝖍𝖆𝖛𝖊 𝖑𝖎𝖐𝖊𝖉 𝖎𝖙, 𝖎𝖋 𝕰𝖋𝖚𝖆 𝖆𝖓𝖉 𝕵𝖎𝖒𝖎 𝖓𝖊𝖛𝖊𝖗 𝖘𝖊𝖕𝖆𝖗𝖆𝖙𝖊𝖉. 𝕾𝖍𝖊 𝖘𝖍𝖔𝖚𝖑𝖉 𝖍𝖆𝖛𝖊 𝖘𝖙𝖆𝖞𝖊𝖉 𝖎𝖓𝖘𝖙𝖊𝖆𝖉 𝖔𝖋 𝖑𝖊𝖆𝖛𝖎𝖓𝖌, 𝖘𝖔 𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖞 𝖈𝖆𝖓 𝖌𝖊𝖙 𝖙𝖔 𝖘𝖕𝖊𝖓𝖉 𝖒𝖔𝖗𝖊 𝖙𝖎𝖒𝖊 𝖙𝖔𝖌𝖊𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖗 𝖙𝖔 𝖚𝖓𝖉𝖊𝖗𝖘𝖙𝖆𝖓𝖉 𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖒𝖘𝖊𝖑𝖛𝖊𝖘 𝖇𝖊𝖙𝖙𝖊𝖗 𝖇𝖊𝖈𝖆𝖚𝖘𝖊 𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖞 𝖋𝖆𝖈𝖊𝖉 𝖆 𝖑𝖔𝖙 𝖔𝖋 𝖘𝖊𝖙𝖇𝖆𝖈𝖐𝖘 𝖎𝖓 𝖙𝖍𝖊𝖎𝖗 𝖗𝖊𝖑𝖆𝖙𝖎𝖔𝖓𝖘𝖍𝖎𝖕.

If I would have read the story ending this way it would have been a masterpiece for me, I don't know about you.

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The Last Days at Forcados || Rewriting the End

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