[A Metallic Way] Visual Haiku

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[Metallic Way]

weaving bamboo stalks
flecked sunshine on the steps, gild
a metallic way

Alternative versions

weaving bamboo
flecked sun, gild
a metallic way

bamboo weaves
flecked sunshine,
gilds a golden way


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I like the video's version best. Love that last line with just one word, gild.

Interesting tid bit: gild can also mean to smear with blood.

Did not know that ... but here it is gold:) How are you?

I'm doing quite well. You?

Thank you so much for that salt tip. Once I did that, everything changed. I mixed a little DE in with the salt. The salt seems to help the DE both sink deeper into the carpet, and not become airborn. I might treat my carpets with it every six months just to deter recurrences. I want to find some way to control fleas without poisoning my animals.

Your most welcome. Isn't amazing what is essential for you and I, for the pets, is the end of the world for pests. I think there is a reason why salt was traded like gold in the past:)

I consulted quite a few sources for flea control, and not one of them mentioned salt. But it's a very obvious solution.

Oddly ... those trying to sell a product or service ... don't want you to be able to solve your own problems. If I told you that I received the answer from asking the universe ... would you believe me? LOL. Mind you, it could have have just been distilled memory. Like DE .. salt dehydrates their exoskeleton. They desiccate and die; but unlike DE, it does not cause lung damage to mammals.

I would believe you, yes.

Good job!
Congrats!

I started learning English, I hope that the time will come when I will be able to understand the speaker.

What is your native language:)

My Russian language.
My late father was Russian, and my late mother was Ukrainian, so I know Ukrainian, though not as well as Russian.
And I know Greek. Since I have been living in Cyprus since 1982. I have lived in Cyprus for many more years than I lived in the USSR.

That is amazing. I am learning Russian but much reading names and food:)

I started learning Turkish last year. I attended courses. But I stopped because of my health.
Now I am learning English on my own.