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Thankyou! I'm a bit embarrassed that someone as good as you read it, as there's so many errors on second reading. I wanted to make sure it was posted but I should have sat on it for a few days and re-read it. I appreciate the comment anyway!

Your story telling flows so natural that I honestly thought you were a fiction writer. I'm always catching mistakes in my writing after I publish, even after several re-reads :)

Wow.. Thanks so much. I've enjoyed writing fiction on HIVE and have written more stories on here than I did when I was a kid and loved writing.