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RE: That voice, that daughter: Day 895: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: opera singer

in dPet21 days ago

Oops, sorry, no - I had hoped the quote-indent would help! And they hyperlink.
My degree in English teaching did not automatically confer on me CLARITY in my writing. Constant vigilance and effort must accompany every effort to communicate.
Someday I'll get it write :) haha

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Did it take time to come back with that rewrite? It was much clearer, but there were fewer surprises, less work on my part. Having read both, I feel a little robbed. AI turned your story into cleverly banal.

AI rewrote my story in less than one second. It's shocking, how fast AI operates.
"Cleverly banal" - I like that.
Clearer, "LessWork" for the reader (I don't want the reader to be working!), but banal.
Ugh.
Will I ever publish...
It seems very few people "get" my writing.
Thank you for reading - and supporting/encouraging me!!!!