Hi Cleo
Good to have you on hive sharing with us your stories and creating feelings too. This is an amazing piece, fiction I guess but if not its a wonderful feeling all the same.
I'd like to introduce the few writing communities we have here on hive
• Freewrite community
• Inkwell community.
Please do well to subscribe to these communities and share your amazing work.
PS: Images have a way of triggering the mind of readers how the corelate with the story and the story teller, just a small advice to use have a pictorial story too alongside the wordings. There are tons of free images out there on pixabay and the likes, Just do well to source all images.
Cheers!!!
Manners and respect mi general Spirall! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate the read and especially the tips! I will definitely check out the other communities❤️