Human Design is a very poor term.
On one hand, It lacks dimensions to plot any person's design.
On the other, the term "Human Design" is not very descriptive as a term, and could be many things, especially anti-darwinistic views.
I found this article way to long to read, so only skimmed.
What i read, i found both way too shallow and way too deep.
Too shallow on each aspect your were trying to convey
And too deep unless a person already had an idea of, and new the terms of astrology, I-ching and sacred geometry.
I strongly suggest you rewrite this in bite sized chunks.
Especially since you want people to understand and use Human Design.
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Thanks for the feedback.