Perhaps I shall re-read, a bit tired tonight. But what a story. I did/do like it. The slow/tired part doesn't let me fully grasp the story and situations. In short, I think: Real club and DJ gig. Likely a real girl, the mother of your child. The bloody parts and all, imagination of some sort induced by the object slipped into your mouth. Sooo funny you ended up at the dance floor and after returning to the DJ booth you hit play. No music before? That part is part of the object-induced imagination, or perhaps better described with hallucinations.
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Yup even tired you got the main theme.
Some parts were chemically enhanced indeed but the things that made her normal, was evil from the beyond, and that evil DNA is still there even after my successful musical exorcism.
Well definitely better than waking up from a scary dream.
Of course there was a multi-track mixer, I just needed the right song to disintegrate that Lorelei. Thanks for the read itΒ΄s always super nice to get feedback from the audience (otherwise I might have been the only one happy with the mixing of music and words, and personal experiences into a little scary story) .
HIVE can be a 'dark' place πΆ