A beautiful story that leads us to imagine both the protagonist's current life and his memories, longings, and desires, those that have disappeared and vanished. You have excellent writing skills. Very good!
I've noticed that you haven't made the introductory post that is necessary to verify your identity. I recommend that you do so in one of the appropriate communities, such as OCD or Aliento. That will open the doors for you to become known here for your good work. Best regards!
Thank you for reading and for the generous words. I’m glad the weave of present and memory resonated. Your encouragement keeps me writing.
Also thanks for the advice, I didn't know that and will do it.
Your introductory post is essential on the platform; it will open more doors for you. Thank you!