I read this story and felt like it had a flow and pace which keeps the reader's attention in control. The main idea of the story seems quite clear with entangled relationships, doubts, trust, and a bit of drama.
Also nice to see you here in Scholar and Scribe Community, have a great week ahead.
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Hello @emaxisonline. Thanks for your visit. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story. Yes, all the entanglements with hopefully a bit of drama to continue.
Thanks for your support. This is my first story in the Community. So far, I'm enjoying it.
Take care, and have a good rest of your week.