Wonderfully written revamp of one of the oldest stories in existence :)
Your descriptions are sublime, you really bring us right into the room with them! Thank you to you and the dreemport team for this great contest, and for sharing your take on the wotw!
Yes - I always like to try to jump in to support the challenges that DreemPort sponsors. hehehe I cant always but this one was on my mind.
Actually - i had a totally different story in my head for this contest - but this is the one that decided to be told! hehehehe
I'm glad that you enjoyed it @grindan!!! see you at PYPT in... hmm less than 12 hours! hehehe