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RE: Red Days - Fantasy Fiction (Part One)

in Scholar and Scribe • 2 years ago

Thanks @anikekirsten

I'm glad the bombastic battle scenes and the more personal thought-stream in the Captain's head gripped you. Also, I'm glad you picked out that use of imagery as I felt it was just right, but quite sparse which helped keep the rapid pace of a battle scene flowing.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed this part 1.
Part 2 will be out on Friday :)

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