I really liked your story, the narrative is engaging with the plot you structured. When people arrive it will be a terrible massacre. Excellent work.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Excellent week.
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What started off as a one-off post based on a writing prompt seems to have become the start of a whole series. I can see all kinds of ways this could develop, but haven't yet worked out which ones would be the best 😀