All things sound pretty good, apart from this one:
I will kill a man and steal his kidney and give it as a present to my father
on his birthday
What the flying kidneys!
Love this poem though, especic. the first stanza.
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That line was supposed to represent the lack of awareness of freedom along with highlighting the anger of an oppressed person. Oppressed people don't really have the full grasp of Freedom x Responsibility/Limitation as they have never been exposed to that.
At least that was the attempt. Thank you for reading and commenting.