This was an interesting perspective on the prompt, @toryfestus. I agree with @litguru that to bring a bit more balance to your narrative, introducing dialogue would drive your story forward, and bring your characters to life. Your piece would also benefit from an edit to catch spelling and grammar issues. This would improve the flow and presentation. Thank you for writing for dreem-wotw. I always love a bit of fiction in the mix :-)
Thank you lots @samsmith1971 🙏🙏❤
I'll make sure to take note of these next time.