This reads like a saga! A full-on, mind-bending, action-pumping fantasy, sci-fi epic movie! hahahahahaha
Each scene was like exploring a new cave, filled with intrigue and drama and POLITICS! hahahaha always the politics that we can relate to! the promise of a new world met with the reality of a worse one! I loved also seeing the perspective of the scene from different angles... very cool to meet your characters that way!
I hope this does really well on Vocal - but if not, I hope that our dreemers can give you some encouragement too!
Thank you for entering this into dreemport! I'm not sure our dreemers are used to a 22 minute read 😆 but I think they will be well pleased with how worthwhile the time spent will be! hehehehe
Goodnight my friend
Thanks, Dreem. Sorry for the long read. The story kind of took on a life of its own. It's kind of weird, in a way. Looking back at the writing it seemed like I was mimicking other books I read in how the story got presented. Anyway, I appreciate the opportunity to submit it to your group.