The story continues and is fantastic! You write beautifully. Everything is very fluid and has a tension that I like.
A transparent black figure moved from behind the camera as the transmission was cut.
This prayer fascinated me. It is also near the end of this chapter so one is intrigued.
A great pleasure to have read you @riskdebonair
Thanks! I've had loads of practice. This is a conceptual rewrite of one of my earliest stories. The original version was written badly/complete trash, but I've snuck six novels underneath my belt since then.
Great news! I know I can read more of your stories or novels