Welcome!
Two hints: Break up your words into paragraphs. One large block of text is hard to read. Use spell check, typos annoy people.
Also, it is very important to include a graphic image after your first sentence. You have to add one that is already on the internet. A good place to find one is www.steemimg.com (find the Embed link that links directly to the image itself)
Good luck!
Thanks for the advice... i get it... just know, 1. im new to this, and I'm not nor have i ever claimed to be a writer. 2. Working from my smart phone, no cpu! 3. The time it would take most to write a post... would take me much longer! Ect... I have a beautiful message. Wither it's grammatically accurate. Is not going to be the best use of my time! "Seeking ghost writers!" Or i might get over my shyness and start making videos. Thanks again for the advice!