Great post! I'd edit and break up the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs and fix the large spacing between paragraphs. I'd also put in subheaders to break it up even more to make it more digestable to read. See my post here for more: https://steemit.com/steemit/@dollarvigilante/want-to-be-a-steemillionaire-here-are-the-crucial-things-to-do-for-newbies-on-steemit
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Thanks Jeff! Will do for sure
I broke up the paragraphs and fixed the spacing, but for the life of me I can't figure out how sub-headers could be applied to a story like this without disrupting the flow. I definitely see in your posts why that makes it easier to read though