Most people who are not good with English will just write few sentences for their self-introduction but you did otherwise. Your long and carefully thought of self-introduction only tells me that you have very good motivation and initiative because you push forward to really learn and improve yourself.
Following are the top three things that I noticed and you may want to consider to improve your English diction.
- Use of conjunctions. You can find more details here.
- Use of tenses: past, present and future tense
- Capitalization and use of punctuation marks. "I" is always capitalized. There should be punctuation mark in every end of a sentence.
You can do it. Keep going! 🙂
Hi @macoolette I want excuse me for do not respond on time, i was not at home yesterday, and today it was igual. I want to thank you for coment and correction me in few things about my english, i will put on practice your suggestions. I wish you a nice day.
No worries, Andy. I hope the best for you! 😊
And I hope to see more of your posts. 😊
Now i'm creating My great inspiration, If was other class of history was more easy for me because i have a great imagination and i can create fantastics stories, but this story is real and i need more time for order my ideas and be careful of not mess up the facts, for what the persons understand and Analyze the story very good.
That's good! 😊