Lol, nice, i love the deep kick, one thing though, could you make the ambient, more ambient?
It feels like it could use some lush dark pads, the main melody is too repetitive except your gonna use it for rap yo.
I dig the egyptian melody and the roll on the left (or was it on the right)
I actually wanted to add more instruments, but I didnt have my hard drive with me with all my instrument packs, so I was stuck with defaults haha. Honestly I have no idea what this would be used for, it's kinda goofy, but yknow, I share the good the bad and the ugly on this page haha.