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in #music5 years ago

I like the way this is developing. The shift to G major of the first part seems more logical now, given this part that follows it.

In musical sense there is not much to wish for in this movement (I mean, it is fine, sorry if my English is not very idiomatic, it is not my native tongue).

What I find intruiging this time is the painting it self. It seems like a grand and majestical image. But look at Merlin. He's not happy. He does not look at the sword, he does not look at Arthur, he seems deep in his own thoughts. As if he has a premonition of darker times to come, because of this sword, or the promise Arthur has made rather rashly.

So as a depection of this painting, I miss this part of the image; some dark tone of foreboding the pain and sorrow that is yet to come.

Sorry if I sound critical. That's not my intention, I like the music you compose. I'm just thinking along, and offering some thoughts that you can use or reject as you see fit. It's your composition after all... :-)