Hey I really like that you are going for steemstem and a science blog, but here are some things you should work on to get more attention. First of, try to find better sources. Yes, wikipedia is a good starting point, but maybe you can find some review articles about bacterial fission on NCBI or google scholar. Second, you English is a little bit awkward. Third, try to be a bit more original. Like, why would anybody care about bacteria, how can this be used for future research... Stuff like that. Please understand this as constructive criticism. I want other science writers to be succesful here! I hope this helps and I these tips help you. Good luck;) I will follow you and I am looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
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First of all, thank very much for this constructive comment!
Yes, I agree with you on the sources. Actually, I use Wikipedia sources to prove that what I say is correct, because all the things I said for the moment are from my courses, but I can't quote my courses. Of course, I look before on the Wikipedia page to see if it's correct. But you right, I will put more scientist article and reviews for next chronicles!
My English... Arf... Yes, this is my big problem, this is not my native language and I never been good in English. But actually, I'm in Australia to improve my English, so, writing my chronicles in English help me for that. I hope that this doesn't prevent to understand my posts...
I try to take relevant and original analogies to explain life process, this is my way to be original. I chose to not explain how sciences work, this is why I never speak about techniques or perspectives. Also for the moment, we don't deal with very original subjects, these first chronicles are to defines some process to understand better the more complex chronicles.
Thank you @lesshorrible and hope that you will prefer the next chronicles!
Again, this was not that I dislike what you doing. This was intended to be helpful to you! Hope you did not think this was too harsh. All the best and Cheers!
No, it's fine! We need harsh criticisms!