Thanks for your corrections and the new review!
In your article you use a LOT of bullet points, pretty much every paragraph is a bullet point. I would use regular paragraphs instead most of the time. This is friendlier to read, and when you do use a bullet point list it will make more impact, as you haven't overused it.
My meta review score: 🏞️🏞️🏞️
wow, am happy i improved. Thanks @mids106, For the positive review 💪. I love using the bullet as it makes my work kind off beautiful lol. Will stop using it or will limit it