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RE: Founded on the words "Be Offended"

in #offended2 years ago

"The law should have no bias..."

Ahahaha! You're a laugh riot. That one line alone was worth the price of admission. Still, for a blog called steemrant you seem short on exclamation points and sentences written all in caps. You did, at least, bold the last line, which is a step in the right direction.

But, I mean, so many Americans have really got the outrage thing down. If you're gonna claim the space, you're gonna need to step up the violation of punctuation and grammatical conventions a bit. I did like that you noted the oxymoronic name of the Abortion Industrial Complex, Planned Parenthood, and compared it to the time-honored Military Intelligence and Jumbo Shrimp. Might have mentioned the super duplicitous Dodge Ram, though.

Anyway, I appreciate the sentiment of outrage behind your remarks, and only hope you can attain to greater expressions of it, so we armchair rioters don't have to get up ourselves.

Thanks!

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I TRULY FEEL LOVED AS A VALUED CUSTOMER NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Much better. I especially like the 1 at the end of the exclamation points. You are clearly on the right track.