My entry this week - thanks for hosting the contest as always @luzcypher!
https://steemit.com/openmic/@carlgnash/open-mic-week-55-only-a-dream-original-song
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My entry this week - thanks for hosting the contest as always @luzcypher!
https://steemit.com/openmic/@carlgnash/open-mic-week-55-only-a-dream-original-song
I'd just like to know how you got the birds on the payroll to chirp in sync with the beat of this "Nash" classic! NICE!
Yep, it's a doozie. I knew it'd be another enjoyable ride, with twists and upside-down surprises. Solid playing and singing... and again, very cool songwriting. Nice, man!
This is a really, really, WELL. WRITTEN. SONG. Insane cords and progressions, and cool rhythms. You have some serious talent. Also, with a last name like Gnash, you'll do all right. OK, can you do me a favor and do the same song, and sing it softer. And slower. Like a depressed rock star on drugs. Who's angry at the world--no, not angry, but apathetic. Then keep the chorus like it is and belt it out. And then slow it back down when you get back on the verses. I just got a gut feeling on this. I'll pay you $5 SBD if you do it. And post it as a reply here. And see how it turns out.