My First Steemit Open Mic Week 90, Yeah!!! "Smoke" (Original)

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

Hey Dtube and Steemit Fam!!

Excited to be posting my first open mic vid today! There's so much incredible talent and so many f%*$ing cool peeps in this community and I knew from the jump I wanted to be a part of it! If you happen upon this vid, thanks so much for watching!

This particular jam is about a failing relationship- a sad and chaotic time in my life. It's crazy how you can go from loving someone so deeply to arriving in a place in a relationship where you actually want to hurt that person. It's crazy how much pain words can cause. I think the lyrics pretty much sum it up.

~Smoke~

You and I we stare across a hazy battlefield of grey
As words continue to rise in the air of things
That we never believed we’d ever speak
And then they fall, cutting through the flesh and bone and straight to soul
And all the secret places only we would know
Nothing hurts quite like wounds from your love

You can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
There smoke in the kitchen
There a fire thats been a burning
But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen

We look away, unable any further to view the pain
And darkness brought on by our own youthful mistakes
Hindsight 20/20 looking back
Or is it too late? We’re both running on fumes that could set us a blaze
And burn this house down to the ground and seal us in graves
Dusted in the ashes of our love

But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
There smoke in the kitchen
There a fire thats been a burning
But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen

You can’t see it I can’t believe it
Were going down in flames
Oh here we go
You can’t see it I can’t believe it
Were going down in flames
Oh here we go



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This is really fantastic :) Keep it up!

Thanks so much!!!

Love it! Thanks for sharing your heartsong here. ;)

Knockin em out the park! I like how you get a lil raspy on this one. You sing with great emotion. Keep it up :)

Aww shanks :D <3

keep it up \m/

I was so busy last week, but I finally wrote a review to your entry. Please feel free to check it out @elainfaye for Open Mic Week 90, I really enjoyed your original song

Thanks for your patience and understanding

https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-90-original-blog

Sweetness!! Thanks so much @verbal-d!!

I'm so happy that you placed in Open Mic this week.

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Click here to see who won Open Mic this week:

Steemit Open Mic Week 90 Winners See Who Won Open Mic And Join Us This Week --- by @luzcypher

Duuuuuude!!!!! Thats awesome!!!! Thank you so much!!! Heading over to check out the winners now!!! Thanks again!

WHOOOO! SUPER FAN AGAIN!

Whoot!!! Thanks love!!! <3

So nice. Your voice is superinteresting. I am following, lady. You are so cool. Greetings.

Thanks love! You are super talented also! I actually started following you a few days ago. Thanks so much for the friendship and so nice to meet you!!

Really? That's awesome. Thank you so much. Yes, right? It is so nice meeting people like us hahaha Nite, lady.

What a great first entry @elainefaye, you are making my judging easy this week, and I thank you for the original music too, this one has some deep soulful tones to it, keep bringing that passion forward, and welcome to our open mic community.

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and the warm welcome!!

Thank you so much for
Taking the time to listen
And the warm welcome!!

                 - elainefaye


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Awesome!!!!
I love the song!!❤

Thanks so much friend!!

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Amazing Voice

Thanks babe!!

love you, your voice your playing and your attitude, amazing, simply i connect with you and i must say that WHOAH! <3 hope to see more of your music here, i love your feel.

Wow, thank you so much!! That means so much to me!! You are super talented to! Just watched your video and followed you! Thanks again love!

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Whoa... Amazing!! Thank you so much! I'll be sure to join you guys on Discord! Thanks again!!

Holy shit wow!!!! Your voice is fucking incredible! And what a killer song!! I can't wait to listen to more of your music. ❤️❤️❤️

Aww, thanks boo! You're hella dope tho too!! Just listened to you Chili Peppers Cover. Yaaaassss girl!! Thanks for stopping by and listening ma!

Fantastic! Great lyrics too... Love the room choice, theee best acoustics.

Thanks so much! And yeeessss! The best! Built in reverb!

Very cool. Great vocals and great tune. Nice guitar work too :)

Thanks so much!! And thanks for listening!!

Superbness @elainefaye <3

Aww, thanks love!!

My pleasure <3

wow wow wow wow wow

this was awesome ma'am

Thank you so much home slice!! Thanks so much for taking the time to listed to my jam <3

@edprivat Yooooooo! Someone tryina still yo nick name brahhhhhh!!!! Not on my watch!! 😂

Hahahah those impostors!!!

This is fantastic ! Well done !

Thanks home slice!!

Love your voice and song, both full of soul. Welcome to Open Mioc. Hope to hear more from you soon.

Thanks so much!! And thanks for making all of this happen!! 300 songs every week is a lot of time and I'm sure the one task out of many during your week. Much appreciated friend!

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@elainefaye, your song was selected to be part of the initial collection set of trading cards for the album of Steemit OpenMic.
Congratulations !!

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Oh wow!! Very cool! Thank you so much!!!

@elainefaye, I'm so glad that you like it.

Maybe you don't know but im leading this Cards & Tokens project in which we are organizing a trading card contest. You can check the Ranking of the cards that already were claimed by their authors.

You can participate too with your cards !! please, login using your steem account and then claim the authorship of your songs (cards). That will create a Post on steem blockchain with your card information so you can start collecting votes.

You can fing more information about the trading cards contest in this link, here.

Greetings