Yeah, man... this is a good one @jaybird! One small lyrical suggestion I thought might help in avoiding a repeating word in the lines:
"Sun comes up and we rise again
To do it all over again"
Might be modified to:
"Sun comes up so we rise and then
We do it all over again"
It might work... That was great though, brother... I loved it!
Excellent suggestion. That part did bother me a little, just never got around to making the version where i’d probably have fixed it , among other things lol
It’s funny bc i was looking for a different word when i initally noticed the reduntancy and never came up with “then” as an opt, just a bunch of worse lines haha. Thx broth P !