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RE: mushin, July 27th

in #personal2 months ago

I noticed the part where it said "Kids frolic to and fro, prompting their mothers to user their full names." i like how you worded that to the point where it told that the kids in question were not exactly having the best behavior. Amazing job with the wording of that!

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Preciate you, Pizza. I must admit I've been there a couple times.. Thanks for your observation, I'll keep that in mind for next time!