I've got to say it's a real treat to find a writer on here with such a good grasp of poetic rhythm. The sinister undertone is very engaging and lines like "Transforming information's call / From icy cosmos cold to warm" are wonderfully expressed. Thanks for the read.
Thank you for the comments. I'm of the opinion that a poem must dance. The dance may be slow and dark, or light and lively, but dance it must.