El daño

[dollface19]

Hola acá les comparto un poema escrito por mi titulado: El daño , espero les guste.

                                      Sin alas para volar

                                  sin sentimientos para sentir

                                      sin corazón para amar

                                      y sin alma para creer.


                                    El daño ha tomado fuerza 

                                     destroza más  la mente

                                   va más allá de las miradas

                                    y siempre esta vigente


                                        Nunca es olvidado 

                          pues todos los mantienen presente

                               El daño que tu ocasionaste
          
                                    no se borra de repente.

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[eleazarvo]

Buen post... Un detalle de acento con la palabra está... Lo demás bien... Escribe más párrafos, no seas pichirre jjjj... Sigue escribiendo, todos estamos aprendiendo y compartiendo ... Abrazos y bienvenida ...

[dollface19]

Muchas gracias jeje ...Saludos.

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