Gone Dark

in #poetry • 9 years ago (edited)

Gone Dark

Powerless fierceness
is chewing on my bones...

Frigid thoughts, internal shouts
reverberate through broken dreams...

Delirium encompasses me, chokes me
What's more, my demise?

Such enduring would I have evaded
had I been conceived with thickened skin...~bloghound~

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November 18, 2017
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Jerryl Todd aka @bloghound (my pen name)

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Wow, thank you so much!!!

@bloghound another great write then the photo is spot on

Thank you, bunches! I appreciate a lot! Muah!

A very nice and accurate verse. We all need to have an iron armour to survive in an insensitive world. But even then suffering cannot be evaded. The good side is that sorrow awakens the heart and raises the consciousness to awareness. :) ... And the pics are soulful. That is a nice twilight light you captured :) ... Followed you, @bloghound

What you've said is more defined than what I've written @nehab ! Thank you so much and for the wonderful visit. You have a pleasant weekend, my friend 😘

you too, have a great weekend, @bloghound :) ... and you are most welcome. My pleasure :)

Great lines with such raw emotions. I hope @curie will look this up

Aww! Thank you very much @sayee ! It's nice seeing you again!

There is an intensity and depth to all of your poetry! @bloghound I enjoy your posts. These monochromatic photos are amazing!

Love love love. Thank you @ninahaskin <3

You're welcome! 💙💚💜

I like your use of paradox, placing two different things together in line one, its beautiful.
I love your poem

Thank you so much @josediccus !

Strong and wise words. I like a charismatic approach to the matter. Your soul releases what it does not tolerate and get strengthens through these creative moments. Great pen. Up and resteem

Oh, thank you @margaretwise <3 Xoxo.

Wonderful photographs.

Oh hi @coquiunlimited ! Thank you very much! Good to see you!

Galing! Sana makatula rin ako ng ganyan! Thanks Jerryl!

Hala, kuya John! Kaw nga jan, eh. Nahawa lang ako sayo hehe. Salamat kuya. Hanggang dyan lang nakayanan. Practice pa more huhu....

nose bleeed:)
what a talent u got sis.
wa nako ma say:)

xoxo

Ahaha...kaw nga jan sis talented eh. Salamat hehe...Happy weekend! <3

sis d ko maarok sis waaa, sana gawa na kau ng book tas benta nyo mga poems nyo:)
dami nyong magagaling dito sa poetry. I'm just happy for you sis:) super!
have a lovely saturday xoxo

Short and sweet.

well said

Thank you!

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Thank you so much!

lovely thoughts and pictures

Thank you, mommy Daisy <3

Nice poem

Thank you, @googlee !

Your welcome

Wonderful words and photo! Tip!

You're way too kind @melinda010100 . Thank you very much!

Hay real nice the the choice of words are just good

Thank you very much @funatoz !

Superb ❤️

Thank you, sis <3

Meaningful words, nice shots. :)

Thank you, sis <3