Looking for ourselves in the grains of sand, the universe rhythmically launches new knowledge of spring love. We are a spiral of impulse in the coming wave of raising awareness. Raise a kiss on my shoulders, my passion, I am the truth in your eyes.
You are the heart of the morning ecstasy in the soul of a tiger on a strong wind. Kiss me with the pure intentions of the viral heart, you are an angel of my past, for which I see the wonderful beach of heavenly blessings - We are part of magic circling as the eternity of transient knowledge.
The poem in the water word brings a wave of our destiny, we ride the stellar path of your thoughts. Show me the hands of salvation, I am the art that floats in the channels of vision while the fairy tales become the reality of our enjoyment -We go forward as warriors of love.
Be incredible in your intention, be determined in the changes that bring joy to human lives. You are an example of supreme love in examples that fly in the minds of the universe. Take the keys to happiness and open the door of your heart, you are the main goal of superior thought.
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Beautiful lines. This poetry is filled with emotions and love
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I am the art that floats in the channels of vision while the fairy tales become the reality of our enjoyment -We go forward as warriors of love
I am overwhelmed by this line, it touches every iota of my being, thank you for this
About to quote the same line :) beautifuly writen piece
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Make one poetry, you have a talent
Im on it sir, i will post it soon, thanks
A beautiful poem, my friend and we are all part of the universe born in love! Thank you @dobartim
Thanks for beautiful words
Omg.. I love this sir, he said and I quote "we go forward as warriors of war" it is love that keeps us going higher with a flying power, keeping us in shape and ready just like Jack Bauer
Thank you for nice comment
your poetry i will support and you know it cause i love your poetry!!! resteemed
When GinaBot gave me a notification about this post, I wanted to ignore it and scroll pass because I was very busy. But then, the intro got my attention and I decided to check it out.
This is poetry at its finest yet simple.
look at how each lines is interwoven and flow into each other perfectly.
The imagery is top notch and I like the passion in the writer's voice.
Excellent poem I must say. I'll peruse over it over and over again trying to catch some hidden literary techniques.
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Thank you for excellent comment
This wonderful poetry about love is just all that one needs to brighten up the day. My day has started off on a good note and the Supreme being keeps His watch over me day and night. Our responsibility is to love and with the wholeness of our heart.
LOVE in our movement
incredible
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Wow this is really good. "We go forward as warriors of love" that is my favourite line... i describe this poem like eternal love thats as beautiful and immeasurable as the universe...
I applaud this poem.
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A perfect combination of melody, beauty and sensuous passion. Your poetry is extremely rich in pictorial quality and felicity of expression. Thanku for such beautiful work of art.
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Thanku, keep supporting :)
Your poetry is always the best, there are no words to describe your poetry completely, really nice words, keep posting such stuff, thank you
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Wow.. amazing post.
I appreciate your post..thanks for sharing
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Wow, wonderful
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Wow.. i like post you @dobartim
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A poem that moves the heart of who reads it. Congratulations you have taught me
Thank you
Wow, great and deep words for life and you nicely pushed the phase of born to successful life, means we all are thoughts, means we have thoughts and visions towards life and we want to achieve it for the satisfaction and pleasure, the life is dynamic and with dynamism we should convert our actions with new vision so that we can walk according to the changes in life. Thanks for sharing this poetry with us, keepup the great work and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂
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The love described in your poem is otherworldly! It's so interesting to read... ^^
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Thank you so much for the invite.. I will head there now. :)
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An entire text that contains only descriptions of the state of soul, feelings and love. A psychological text par excellence.
Excatly
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The poem falls greatly on the right pattern ...... I guess is expressed in simple words of diction having a great correlation with the one super being that only him have access to great happiness in disposal .......... It an acknowledgment.
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Let me add my own line.
We are the warrior of love.
We against the world,
With no boundaries, we fly together in the sky.
The database of my storage facilities,
We know no secrets,
Everything we share.
Even when night comes,
We still continue the journey in our dreams.
The sun set in the morning,
The cock crows as reminder
Your beauty is the shine in my life.
Oh! If this fairy tale is real,
Your smile will I forever save in my heart.
My angel, I fight for you.
@dorbatim, you are really an inspiration
Thank you very much, make one poetry
I love love..so I love love poetry
This particular portion stuck
Beautiful piece
Thank you
So inspiring, I was moved and touched by your words. Ride on
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The link please.
Wow
Lovely, this is beautiful.
It speaks volumes and it's really deep.
Let me personalize this: I am an example of supreme love
Yes
Words are so beautiful, I'm really excited to read them as if the passion in my life is raging and burning, very inspiring my friend @dobartim.
Thank you very much
Okey. This is a poem who fokus to tell us about quality of poetry
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This poety is incredible. I believe that happiness is real.
Thanks for sharing my friend
You are welcome
Thanks @dobartim
Be incredible in your intention, be determined in the changes that bring joy to human lives. This is exactly what a man with the heart of the universe will think and do, bringing joy to everyone all over the world. This is a mission though hard to fight to succeed, though only very few people would be willing to embark on, but if the little of us can start the journey, its rest assured it would be accomplished. We should remember that, "a drop of water can become an ocean". Humanity deserves our goodwill, hope we attain that. Thanks for inspiration.
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Above part of the poetry is the heart soul of poetry according to me. In daily life we need to implement this for our love ones, taking them for granted is our way of life nowadays :(
Loved it. Thanks for share :)
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This part sounds so magical "We are part of magic circling as the eternity of transient knowledge."
Also when you wrote "You are an example of supreme love in examples that fly in the minds of the universe. " that reminded me of Cupid(the son of goddess of love according to accient greek,who flew around shooting people with arrow of love)
Outstanding poetry.
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BROKEN WING
By WIn Ansar
Not a point of view in painting
Just a meaningless scratch
Not the twilight between the drowning of light
Only the light of a lonely weed
I'm a rainbow without wings
Incarnate between space and time
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wow. what for lovely words.
made my day
thanks
Never knew poetry could take this format @dobartim.. It's beautiful, it contains the beauty of the skies and of "heavens".
Am amused.. Wanna go read again
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This is beautifully written!!
This is in fact accurate... I commend your poetry prowess 👍
Very romantic poetry and touching feelings. I was carried away feeling while reading it. Thanks for the poem @dobartim