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Thank you, @jaynie, for your kind encouragement! :D

P.S. It's part of a loosely defined collection of fiction and poetry in which I am exploring the largely unrecognized and under-appreciated hope of the authentic "heaven" of Christianity.

In that sense, I do count it as "essentially true," although as yet not in its final form. ;)

Well keep exploring :) You are doing fantastically!