Interesting variation on a sonnet - I would have switched the last two stanzas to end on a more traditional couplet, but it's a bit outside the box anyway - just a thought :)
Interesting variation on a sonnet - I would have switched the last two stanzas to end on a more traditional couplet, but it's a bit outside the box anyway - just a thought :)
Thank you John.
I value comments like this very highly because I recognize poetry as your wheelhouse. :D