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RE: I Dream (Original Poetry)

in #poetry4 years ago

This is the awe and vigour of someone who loves traveling, visiting new places and probably basking in the excitement of new adventures. I definitely could feel the fourth verse spelt the whole essence of the poem and gift me a different direction. In life basically we hope to achieve more, dream differently and get to experience what it feels to travel the world and all it's excitements and thrills. Nicely written. It's been a while I've stumbled on one of our piece.

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Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it. I hope all is well on your side of the world.

All is definitely well, I'm currently roofing that project at the moment, there are unrests in my side of the world, so building is a little laid back. I'm looking at may or June to get everything done.

I'm glad to hear the project is coming along! I can't wait to see the finished product!