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RE: At the bottom of the pond

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

This one is filled with IMAGERIES, the stanza four is filled with imageries of sea-like experience where a few words gave the meaning to the idea of the sea shore.

The second to the last stanza spoke of regrets of things undone, and things that could've occured.

All in all the way you switched from one idea to another is friggin amazing it's a master piece of art and skills.
It is calming, I mean I felt the solemnness of the poem it's amazing and this is sweetly enchanting to the ears.

Beautiful one here @d-pend


No one will read the tomes of glass.
No one will sigh the tears of agony.
No one will seek the rifts of cloud,
Except the swimmer at the bottom
Of the cosmogonal pool.

I love the heightened emotion embedded in this last stanza, it concluded an amazing poem you've penned so wonderfully

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I really like the last stanza very heart touching.