I promised one a day and I am trying to find the best poets with great word play, and tonight I came across a poet who beautifully put a poem together.
As you all know, I am a huge fan of poetry and the ability to fuze words together to take you on a grand journey. In other words, the ability to make you travel time is just a well formed ability to tickle your mind.
It amazes me how we have such a vocabulary, but many of us can't for a poetic line to save our lives. Yet, so many out there are surgical with there pen and paper.
This poem was written by poetryaccident, and I just happen to love the way this poet finessed words together. The title to the poem is Vespers Spoke...
Vespers Spoke
Vespers spoke behind the veil
in a language none shall hear
intoned with a natural flair
honeyed words flit to my ear
I would ask who spoke aloud
syllables I'd dare not speak
except I know it was myself
chorus to the Almighty's bliss
vestments decked my other frame
one or another, they were changed
though the latter was preferred
a holy cassock of many hues
the quiet pride of my expression
was condoned by the phantoms
just as real as myself
yet immaterial within the fog
these invocations disturb my day
when memory trips back to sleep
asking nothing in return
but promising much in verity
beauty sought is mercy's gap
no longer harboring safe respite
as the holy is made clear
behind the veil of fancied dreams.
“Vespers Spoke” is about the messages from the land of dreams.
I'm not a poet.
If I was, I wouldn't show it.
Maybe I lied.
A joke so funny, I died.
My rhymes are simple.
Like a teenage pimple.
I guess I'll burst on the scene now.
Or maybe I'll milk the cow.
Anyway, I just thought I say,
I too enjoy a little bit of wordplay.
Have a nice day.
Nice
Thanks. Wrote it on the spot. Got ignored until now.
I like your posts so much that I always wait for your post and with your post attention Podium I thank you very much for sharing such a good post with us.
This is a very beautiful post of poetry! It bleeds emotions with every word. One day I will catch someones eye like you with this poet!! Thank you for sharing this piece of word art!!
A very beautiful poem, worthy of praise. @joseph
very creative advice...i apricate this...
thanks a lot you for your activity..
"Your shadow I always remember on the eyelids, your name is always vibrated from the lips, then how will you disappear from me?"
I liked the rhymes,
Keep doing what you love☺
v good
Awwww this is awesome.. I keep on reading this poetry all over and over again.. I will try and write it down and read it to my friends..
Wao nice when you get a poet tell us plzz
Wao its such an great post keep it up
that is good great word..
good rhymes
i appreciate your post ^^! Thanks.
i appreciate your post ^@^! Thanks.
I love poetry too, thank you for sharing this.
I also like poetry, very interesting poem, few lines in this poem make me feel soo good :)
poetryaccident eh? looks like I'll be checking him out!
Thanks for bringing another one to our attention!
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하늘과 물이 모두 푸르네요. 푸른 사진 속에서 나오는 푸른 기운을 받아갑니다.poetry is life
Well as a poet my response are locked in this lines
Poetry is beauty
Words are magical
Filling the heart of the heavy
And mending the fragmental
Poetry is a healer
Words are his balm
Lives you happy ever after
Just by the touch of his palm
@joseph I hope it an write this well till the wi" kept working on it
Gee, you're right . These are well-finessed words, and I guess I'd have to say the Lines I most appreciated are:
"Beauty sought is mercy's gap
no longer harboring safe respite" AND
Vespers spoke behind the veil
in a language none shall hear
intoned with a natural flair
honeyed words flit to my ear
#poetry
I am trying to find the best poets with great word play, and tonight I came across a poet who beautifully put a poem together..
I thought about a poetry community to encourage poets..
I thought about the joy that would remove our dread
Perpetuated through poetic challenge and duets
Giving the steemian poet a voice to be heard
This kind of word gymnastics is why I can't stop checking in on your posts. This is awesome. So awesome that one has to just say thank you for these wonderful words.
I love poetry too..thanks for sharing.
Its soo beautiful..
As much as i'm new on seemit, i can't enough of your well composed poem, you have just completed my day with this peice. Thanks
This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing! I just released the first part of a 3 part series that delves into very similar subject matter. I love how many separate ways a certain subject can be interpreted.