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until your shoulders melted on the path and vanished.
I gazed at you with such warmth within my heart,
a peaceful mind that sorted out a tangled story
of two hearts who had no more than a day
to reconnect and lose themselves into
each others' arms while hoping
there'd be another chance
to see their eyes before
a new morning
star would
arise.
Here are some of my poems:
A TALE OF A MINNOW AND A WHALE
LONG WAY DOWN
SPIDER QUEEN
MINA'S EULOGY
THE CIRCLE OF LIFE
YOU KNOW IT ALL
CONFESSION OF A HUSBAND
BROKEN DREAM
THE RETURN OF A HERX
CLOSE THE DOORS
IT IS LOVE
BROKEN SOUL
FREEDOM
SPEECHLESS
CHECKOUT POINT
TOO DEEP - TEASER
TEENAGE YEARS
A CHILD'S MIND
PINK
PAIN
DARE
LOST
LUCKY # 3- Teaser
THE LION- Teaser
ALL ABOUT LOVE- Teaser
REDEMPTION- Teaser
YOU ARE NOT ALONE- Teaser
FADE THE PAIN- Teaser
THE SILVER TRAY- Teaser
A PAWN - Teaser
Its not just the words but the format that is beautiful.
You start as a duo, but end ...
alone?
I am glad you enjoyed reading it!
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beautiful poetry <3
Thank you!
As usual you did a great job.
I am sorry I couldn't meet you in real life as I am sure that we could have discussed something about our community and the future projects we might have. You are a great author and will like to see you writing more.
I apologize for the late reply! No worries, we'll have other chances to meet. Thanks for your kind words!
Awesome poem. I like the shape of it, how it forms like a funnel as if channeling the love into the final "new morning" and "rise." One could also see this as a metaphor for a funnel cloud that whips up a strong wind of destruction, perhaps the subtext of the clear whether we see on the surface.
At any rate, beautiful!
Oh, how I liked your vision of this poem! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
My pleasure. Thank you for a grand read.
I really feel these words right now, very beautiful xx
Thank you! I hope you are doing better now. ;0)
Really nice poem and nice formatting too. You are a great poet and enjoy your work immensely. I hope you can find a way to continue to express yourself :)
Thank you for your support! I appreciate it. I write daily , though I don't post everything. ;0)
Beautiful poem, and the formatting is incredible - I have never seen anything like that but it really does catch your attention - so precisely done as well it must have take so long to get that to make such a perfect triangle.
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Thank you! It started as a quatrain but I ended it up in a triangle. ;0)
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Lovely poem and interesting format.
Thank you for your powerful words @lymepoet.
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Thanks for the read and comment! Have a wonderful evening!
Lovely poem. ❤
Thanks!