The nap - an original poem (@snooks homework)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)


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it is about time to make a gap
yawning in the early afternoon
is this just an old folk's trap?
or maybe just some lucky boon?

drowsily listening to the radio
fading in and out of transmission
sleep losing and gripping flow
creating today's sleepy division

what does it benefit us to snooze?
am i not wasting this time in bed?
although it's time here we lose
we regain the clarity in our head

thirty minutes will do the trick
eyes again rested and open wide
brain's contents a bit less thick
feeling refreshed and amplified!

@madevi
image credits - AvinaCeleste


Last night @snook asked us to write a poem about a nap without using the actual word nap... I was a bit late reading her messages and when i did i was kinda drunk... So, after taking a long nap i wrote this little poem in the hope that my "homework" will get a good grade :D

If you want to read more, check out some more stuff I wrote:

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death comes to us all
burst that bubble baby!
words untamed
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if the shoe fits...
true love never dies
if you're not confused
too dangerous to touch
a tale of eleven cities
consumed by consumption
return to innocence
she burns bright
chaos and order
my valentine
a limerick about my birthday
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Madevi.

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oh, you captured so perfectly what runs through my head most mornings. ;)

thanks! it goes through my mind mornings, afternoons and evenings these days... but that might have to do with me getting the garden winter ready :D

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