I really liked the way you used rhyme at the end of this poem. It had an effect of really emphasizing the demeanor of the piece. Good work.
I really liked the way you used rhyme at the end of this poem. It had an effect of really emphasizing the demeanor of the piece. Good work.
Thanks, @moeknows - end rhyming was a feature of Shakespearean sonnets - they actually employed a rhyming couplet - but I liked the idea of using rhyme to tie up the poem and use it often in my writing. Thanks for your response.