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RE: #11.2 - A poetic proof of the fact that YOUR BODY IS CONNECTED TO THE UNIVERSE - [Concept No.11 (An original poetry)]

in #poetry6 years ago

You have some really great concepts in this epic poem. I also like how you fluctuated with the rhyme scheme throughout. Nice write.

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Thanks Moe. :) More amazing concepts are on its way :D