Impressive - to think this is your first English poem! I love how you described the scene and then Azalea did not appear again. Beautiful message.
Life is like this, beauty is sometimes not long, so cherish the moment of nowadays.
I do understand what you're saying, and I must say, your poem shows us your message without you having to state it. That means your poem was good to explain that what we have today might be gone tomorrow.
Many thanks to you for your coming and your comments.
Yes, beauty is short, even life is short too,
have every moment excellent and worthful in our lives.
Good luck, God bless you, my friend.