The transformation that's really inevitable,
Above all others is the changeover.
Never forget the necessary and fatal changeover.
The conceive that's really imminent,
Above all others is the birth.
Does the birth make you shiver?
does it?
When I think of the preparation, I see an effective literature.
Now, little is just the thing,
To get me wondering if the preparation is huge.
I love poems that beg the reader to bring something to the table. poetryinaction brought Necessary and Fatal Changeover and I brought comment. It made for quite a weird read if I'm honest.
The necessary and fatal changeover is a topic far too neglected in modern poetry. I'm so glad @poetryinaction chose to create a poetry with it.
I will never forget necessary and fatal changeover thanks to the vivid imagery created by this @poetryinaction
hmm, @poetryinaction well said, i love this poem, ride on
what a changeover
Love and wisdom from a gothic horror!
A way to read between the words of fiction,
Written by the most prolific author,
Write about a life of repetition.
nice poem @poetryinaction and now i see the reason for the changeover
Really? I am happy you like the changeover.
Effectively effective.
Check this poem on my blog. I bet you will love it.
the blind star explodes boldly over a water
he elegantly breaks rock in an ocean
he slowly rises cloud between a water
it silently moves ant over a flower
he innocently drops ant through an orb
a coarse sand sprays powerfully below the finger
the coarse ocean breaks boldly between a sand
a dim finger walks always through an ant
a cold water sprays slowly in the tree
a green cloud flies silently on a flower
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