This is a lovely poem! I quite enjoy it honestly and the way you speak from multiple perspectives, wondering about the eclipse! A picture might have brightened the poem more, but it creates a poem in my mind, where luna has a face and from many perspectives from space <3 keep it up!
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I often try in my poems to speak from multiple perspectives--sometimes explicitly, and sometimes, as in this one, more subtly. :-)